PRELIM LR FEEDBACK

 


1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. If you've received your feedback via email, you can simply cut and paste it from the email into your blog.

WWW:
You have displayed some excellent editing and technical skills throughout this preliminary exercise. The choice of setting was an excellent choice however just be careful that you are able to see the characters and action.

EBI:
The obvious feedback is ensuring that you film in landscape rather than portrait. Also, ensuring that your project felt slightly more suited to the horror genre than fantasy but this is a good starting point.

2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points (What Went Well) and three EBI bullet points (Even Better If) for your preliminary exercise.  

WWW: I set the scene in the prelim and made it seem tv fantasy and scary like.

EBI: when i put it in landscape and the lighting wasnt that good i would say and need a better lighting

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