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  1) Type up your teacher's feedback  in full  plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. If you've received your feedback via email, you can simply cut and paste it from the email into your blog. WWW: You have displayed some excellent editing and technical skills throughout this preliminary exercise. The choice of setting was an excellent choice however just be careful that you are able to see the characters and action. EBI: The obvious feedback is ensuring that you film in landscape rather than portrait. Also, ensuring that your project felt slightly more suited to the horror genre than fantasy but this is a good starting point. 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write  three  WWW bullet points (What Went Well) and  three  EBI bullet points (Even Better If) for your preliminary exercise.   WWW: I set the scene in the prelim and made it seem tv fantasy and scary like. EBI

 1) www: Nasim- some knowledge of the csps in this paper      ebi: no detail or clear examples - you are not fully answering the Qs such as Q4 - explaining the advert. 2) maybw ; Recent cultural events referenced in cover lines – ‘See EU later’   references Brexit while ‘Love in the time of Corona’ reflects Covid pandemic. Suggests that wealthy British people want to know the latest news and current affairs.  3)i should have used  disequilibrium at the start when the village is associated with chaos (fruit falling, bus stopping, people shouting). This is juxtaposed with the calm, heroic persona that the audience encounters when they meet Hepburn. 4 1 point: Emma Weymouth, Marchioness of Bath, cover star – reflects changing attitudes towards race and ethnicity in Britain and the influence of campaigns such as the Black Lives Matter movement.    2nd point is Serif font for title connotes formality, high class and how well established the magazine is 3rd point is Cover image reflects Brit

  Nasim- statement of intent Title: Heard but not seen INTRODUCTION - netflix or NOWTV because other channels dont really have this genre -My 2 minute clip scene would appear on episode 1 to hold the characters attention and make them want to watch more.(Leave them on a cliffhanger) -Chase scene from something thats heard but not seen. MEDIA LANGUAGE: -The disruptions would be the antagonist hearing voices of something supernatural and we as the audience dont really know who it is and for the end of this scene it is revealed he takes the antagonist .(second episode we will see who) -I will be using for my 2 minute clip the close up shot because it really shows the protagonists fear and how scared vulnerable or happy she is. -Also will be using medium shots to show the audience everything in that clip and the surroundings that danger the protagonist. I would say setting because the forests do give off very mystical dystopian settings and is very good for a tv fantasy drama 2 minute c